Subject[dq] Small Rulebook request
FromErrol Cavit
DateMon, 27 Mar 2006 14:41:36 +1200
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It has been pointed out that the Geas spell description uses a mixture of
terms for the subject of its attentions (compelled being; geased being;
geased person; the compelled). I've changed the references to being to
either 'target' or 'geased entity' (note that the target requirement is
'Sentient Enity'). 
 
I don't _believe_ I've changed the meaning of the description in the
process, just removed any possible confusion due to using different terms
for the same thing. 
 
http://www.dragonquest.org.nz/dqwiki/index.php/Geas_Reword
<http://www.dragonquest.org.nz/dqwiki/index.php/Geas_Reword> 
 
I've put the two versions side-by-side to aid comparison. I'd appreciate a
couple of people checking it over and pointing out any issues.
 
If anyone is keen and wants to rewrite from scratch into something better
phrased, please do so below the comparison table.
 
Thanks
Errol
 

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anyone is keen and wants to rewrite from scratch into something better =
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